This week my opening sentence comes from the first story in the Winter Wishes anthology. The authors are Vivian Arend, Vivi Andrews and Moira Rogers. This is an ebook that I received from NetGalley courtesy of Carina Press for review. The book will be published on Monday, Dec. 6.A Twist on TraditionHere is the opening sentence:
A woman has the Christmas Eve from Hell. Two cat shifters play naughty games. And a witch brings out the beast inside the man. The magic of the season takes on a whole new meaning in these three fantastic—and festive—novellas from some of the best voices in paranormal romance.
She's the cat's meow, and he's ready to pounce.Truly a gag-worthy opening sentence. That is an incredibly bad pick-up line and really cheesy too. The story just has to get better. What do you think?
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Yes, we don't hear that "cat's meow" expression very much these days...LOL
ReplyDeleteI love the cover on the book.
Here's mine:
http://laurelrainsnowswonderland.wordpress.com/2010/12/03/friday-memes-beginnings-56-dec-3/
One would certainly hope that it gets better. I agree with Laurel-Rain, the cover is much better than the opening line!
ReplyDeleteHere's mine: http://myreadersblock.blogspot.com/2010/12/book-beginnings-on-friday.html